What happend to that
spark?
I don't know what's wrong
Maybe us is wrong
You said you loved me
You picked me up
And swung me around
Now you've set me down
You said her name
In front of me
You looked at me
And thought of her
You said you loved me
You picked me up
And swung me around
Now you've set me down
Author notes
Written July 16th, 2003
A contest entry
- Past Memories by SilverxXxShadow.
250 points, ended July 24, 2003, 27 entries
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As great as they are, relationships can really suck... they are great when they work, but it's the worst feeling in the world when they go bad. At least it's great to be with someone, and great experiance, no matter what the outcome. Even if a relationship turns out bad, you grow as a person, and you learn from these experiances and learn how to act/interact with the person your ment to be with. But back to what you were saying in this piece, it feels so unfair when you are with someone who isn't over the person they used to be with. You put in your all, yet they dont put anything in, and you are left feeling used. The rebound as they call it.
But just remember, every one that doesn't turn out is one closer to the one you are ment to be with. good luck, and thanks for sharing, this was a really great piece -
This is amazing. Its lyrical and poetic at the same time.
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This is a nice piece here. I'm sorry if this actually happened to you...relationships suck. Anyways, I really like this poem...it had a nice flow to it which made it pleasant to read. Thank you for entering....good luck.
~Shadow
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