The sun was - the sun is
Love was - love is
Breath was - breath was
Her life is. Marble is.
Author notes
Not sure if this was what you were wanting...or expecting. But I would have this on my grave stone to show just how "odd" and misunderstandable I am (was) and that of course even though in body I won't be here, my memory will live on (hopefully).
In a list
A contest entry
- design your own epitatph by Dull Red.
340 points, ended May 4, 2007, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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your words are so beautiful. also, i simply adore your backround. lovely job.
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I admit, at first I was scratching my chin when I finished this, but I'm glad you've added your notes to the author's section to explain a bit
This would be a beautiful epitaph really. Nothing more to say about it. At first sight it just seems as if you jotted something together, but in the meantime I read it already 4 times and it just stands there, as one. Nothing more needed, one thing less would be a shame
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I think this is a very poignant piece
of poetry. I like the brievity - it
gave the poem more of an impact.
Oh, and can I use this background, too?
It's sooo beautiful. Love, Lane
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Weird poem I don't really didn't get it at first,its a litte confusing. please return the favor. great write
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Say what?
Strange poem. I didn't get it at first, but when I thought about it, I think I sort of started to understand. And then I saw the notes and the contest and I got it. Good poem, lots said in few words.
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Less words say so much, I love it...great words to live by...good luck in the contest! Thanks for sharing
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this one caught my eye because I have a poem titled "What Is..." I liked your poem. I am glad I read it. Thank you for sharing. You seem to write ALOT! Where do you get all your ideas? peace and light, kp
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