This is luxury I’ve never known
outside certain books I’ve read.
Pretty girls take my clothes off
And take me to my bed.
A paradise for a lazy man,
Who likes a woman’s touch.
Perhaps I’ll read something later.
Now, I’m doing nothing much.
A Regal time. For such a reward
I must have been living right.
I ring a bell and a pretty girl
Comes to my bed at night.
This pampering is quite the thing,
It’s really living in style.
I thought I needed a holiday
Like this for quite a while.
A special chef prepares my meals,
Pretty girls serve them with charm
And my drink comes with no effort
straight through a tube in my arm.
I'm even attended in the bath
By another comely lass,
And sometimes i lie and admire the view:
DRAW CAIDRAC on the glass.
Please tell me what you think
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I'm not a lawyer, but I have heard of these holiday things, maybe I'll remember to take one before visiting the same "hotel" as yours
Excellent rhyme and flow backing up a very well delivered message, serious content wrapped in humour, great stuff
Jeff
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Interesting. The ending was not what I expected. At least you were able to look on the bright side of things and sounded like a restful stay. A great write. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you.
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Sounds like a great time was had. I need to visit this resort.Just would prefer pretty boys
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OH my. Well, one must think positive, no matter the circumstance. Well done. I enjoyed this. ~Pamela
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oh wow all comforts makes a man
but living and being a human gives a better variety in life style..you wrote this with a style that only you can very interesting but with nurses instead of a woman and a man
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Excellent Write!!!
Hello, Well not the ending I was expecting. Very good my friend. Great rhyme and flow. Bravo!!!! You take care, Sandy
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Not that you were aiming for this... but i hardly think it's a vacation to be in a hospital as you have so detailed here(or even in a hospital bed at home with 24/7 nursing care. Maybe you should see a doctor. Just my interpretation. Course, your imagery is what has helped you create such an interesting write.
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A Lovely poem [though I hope you're well ]. Just calm imagery, simple rhyming scheme and a lovely little humour to it. The ending is a lovely payoff. You are one of the best poets on this site.
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Interesting write. I did not expect the ending. Good job
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Obviously not the NHS
Love the light mirth here and trust it's not from recent experience.
Barb
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