So sweet, so tender
So endlessly free and filled with hope
A sign of love, a piece of truth
A footprint in a heart
A heart alike a blossom
Unopened and fragile
Left in the sand
Washed upon a stranger's shore
One heart
Alike a rose's
Fragility
Author notes
Okay, I used to be in love...just an explanation...
A contest entry
- PhantomsAngel87's Picture Contest .... again :P Only 10 entries by Manda Kathryn.
600 points, ended April 16, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A footprint in a heart
A heart alike a blossom
Unopened and fragile
I like this poem! It showed the beauty of pain...if that makes since. I like the rose metaphor you used to explain the sweet and fragile heart. Good job!
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Sweet, pretty and slightly sad... beautiful comparisons & imagery too... luv it gf! I've come to learn that... u can actually love & NOT b fragile! Seriously! How? The key is MATCHING the M.F*er's "heartlessness!" Sound contradictory? Well, here's the 2nd part: ever so slowly & so very naturally seeming to him... you then leak out a li'l bit more true
GL with life & love! xoxo
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Excellent.....loved the imagery and feeling in this...:left in the sand washed upon a strangers shore.." splendid...
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I wish I could tell you some thing to help you toughen up your heart. I have know all to well what it's like growing up not having a really suportive family. I do know what it's like to feel like there will never be someonewho really truely loves you.There is someone out there for you, it's just a matter of finding them, and not giving up completely. I'm sorry I haven't been here for you as much as I would have liked. I've missed our talks.
Love ya Kiddo
Granny Cheri
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this really good i wish i could think of poems to right like this one. i think i have a block going for poetry and i dont know why.
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Beautiful write, short, sweet, lovely, it has all the potentials of greatness incapsulated within it, thank you for sharing this write with me.
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i liked it.. very good sweetie
love you sis!!!
XoXoXoX
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Fantastical!!!
like i said...fantastical poem.I can feel the emotion spewing onto my eyes...its great.i love it.I shall now let my eyes feast upon more of your tasty words
The SHI
is back
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Ahhh What a lovely sweet poem
I loved the gentle tone used with this write and the way you kept it short and simple yet strong and touching
Wonderful write
Thank you for your entry & Good luck
Stay safe
~Amanda
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I love this... it's short and sweet... I like the similes you used here... Thanks for sharing, this was a great read!
The only thing I don't like is the colour choice... the pink font on blue background makes my eyes hurt... Maybe make the background darker?
I wish you lots of luck in the contest!
Annie
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