Many times this stories been told
The story of evil’s truest form
Many people have heard it unfold
Yet many couldn’t survive the storm
We grow weary of this tale
Though it shall be told once more
The others came to fail
At least you’ll know what’s at store
She’s sent from the depths of hell
With a cold dark heart
This child of the night
Will tear your soul apart
The only advice to give
Stay in the light
Because danger lurks
In the dark, in the night
Beware if you stray
She’ll fill your mind with lies
Even if you put up a fight
She’ll hide the truth from your eyes
Giving into her lust
She’ll seduce your flesh
Cares your lips
And rip the heart from your chest
She’ll make you watch
Bite by bite
While she finishes her feast
Before you lose your sight
Just remember this
Your soul will take flight
And no one will help you
In the dark, in the night
A contest entry
- Your Very Best #2 (pre-writes allowed) by Dark Whispers.
415 points, ended April 18, 2007, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I think this poem was really great such an awsome talent also the rhyming was very much well done,,,this poem was so powerfull have yourself a good night and good luck in this contest!!
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the flow of this poem was a little jagged but the message was clearly told. great write. thanks for entering.
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