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My Promise...Now Broken

Everynight I cry myself to sleep
    [I've never seen her cry]

I've faked a smile everyday of my life
    [She always seemed so happy]

Today I cried for hours, making a promise
    [I never knew anything was wrong]

I promised to only show the real me
    [I've never seen her so sad]

I didn't last very long, it's become routine
    [She seemed to change moods so quickly]

It's to risky to let them see me, I can't trust them
    [I just wish she would open up to me]

They don't care anyway.
    [Maybe I care too much...]

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Different then usual but I dno. I know what i mean...

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  • Losing Hope
    April 16, 2007

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    Hmmm
    I understand it
    And i know exactly what its like
    ..Way too well.
    But its awesome
    You did a great job.
    Keep it up



    xox


  • Walking Tall
    April 15, 2007

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    its really good
    i love this style
    and you do it so well.
    love ya bambi.
    Hope evrythings alright tho
    i know everything never alrite
    but hopefully enough is.

    if not
    talk 2 us
    we're pretty useless
    but if all of us stumble around in the dark
    odds are better of finding the light =D
    love u
    SeeJ


  • The-Singer
    April 15, 2007

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    Confusing but I think I get it.
    Very good job Bek.
    You mean the world to me
    Love you.
    Sean


  • Phiona
    April 15, 2007

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    Wow. This is just, Wow.
    You seem to manage to descibe something that I have felt in the past so well, especially the line:
    It's to risky to let them see me, I can't trust them.
    It's amazing and tonnes of kudos to you Bek.
    Congrats.