Everynight I cry myself to sleep
[I've never seen her cry]
I've faked a smile everyday of my life
[She always seemed so happy]
Today I cried for hours, making a promise
[I never knew anything was wrong]
I promised to only show the real me
[I've never seen her so sad]
I didn't last very long, it's become routine
[She seemed to change moods so quickly]
It's to risky to let them see me, I can't trust them
[I just wish she would open up to me]
They don't care anyway.
[Maybe I care too much...]
Author notes
Different then usual but I dno. I know what i mean...
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hmmm
I understand it
And i know exactly what its like
..Way too well.
But its awesome
You did a great job.
Keep it up
xox

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its really good
i love this style
and you do it so well.
love ya bambi.
Hope evrythings alright tho
i know everything never alrite
but hopefully enough is.
if not
talk 2 us
we're pretty useless
but if all of us stumble around in the dark
odds are better of finding the light =D
love u
SeeJ

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Confusing but I think I get it.
Very good job Bek.
You mean the world to me
Love you.
Sean

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Wow. This is just, Wow.
You seem to manage to descibe something that I have felt in the past so well, especially the line:
It's to risky to let them see me, I can't trust them.
It's amazing and tonnes of kudos to you Bek.
Congrats.





