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Love and Ashes

Sixty syllables
I could write that line five times
- where’s the joy in that?
None that I can see.
But I’ll write of love.
in sixty syllables
too passionate a love,
burns  hearts to cinders
in no time at all
before you have begun
its over and done.

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  • wattle silver member
    April 15, 2007

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    Ms Kethry, you have been busy today. I like. Sometimes it last until they are sixty, and just sometimes sixty years too. --- Thank you.


  • DancingRed
    April 15, 2007

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    Short and clever, and filled with immense love. The first part made me smile, the ending makes me feel warm and fuzzy. Thanks for entering.

    DancingRed.