OOOHHHH NOOO!
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In a way, this *IS* actually kind of deep. But slightly funny, if it isn't. All in all a cool poem (thing) cuz you can look at it in a lot of ways.
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i forgot the clappy hands
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wow... that was heavy... shit man... yay.
can i interview you for a speech im doing on music? -
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-thankyou. understand that i am owned by a sheet of paper. if you want to interview me... hm, dont publish it. you will be sooo damn sorry.
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wow. i forgot i asked that... damn those sheets of paper. the will consume us all. and you can not kill them. they are like sheep. anyways. longtime no talk. whats crackin? im just in texas... cant wait to get back to CO. just heard becoming the bull. thats some heavy shit man. cant wait to get the new album... wats the release date on that shit?
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Well....I guess you want to know what I think...don't you
Honestly...I liked it. It was a great poem but the rhyming scheme threw me off hard core...but some people like there being no set rhyme scheme so I guess it is up to you whether you like it or not.
it's just it wend from
ABCBABCB
THAN AABC
TO AABBCCC
But other than that I loved this poem babe.
Love
Amanda
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yeah heh i need to fix the rhyme. kinda forgot about it during certain parts.
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