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While You Look On

I didn't know it would come to this:
My sanity or your satisfaction.
Over & over you utter, "I don't want you".
But your actions are screaming differently.

I need you emtionally & you need me physically.
I cannot continue on like this.
I am dying ever so slowly...
While you look on.

Every look into your eyes, my heart bleeds.
I know what you want and I know what I want.
They are not the same.
God, it makes me feel so helpless.
I ache for you & cannot do a thing about it.

You tell me not to cry myself to sleep,
But it's too late...
I've come to that point, where,
I cannot stop thinking of you.
And it hurts to even breathe,
Because I stand here holding out my broken heart.
While you look on.




Dedicated to ZCB

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  • 245Trioxin
    April 18, 2007

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    Over & over you utter, "I don't want you".
    But your actions are screaming differently.

    The exact opposite is the staple of my life!

    Actions and words don't meet up. As if they are on skewed paths and I'm left thinking...she must have multiple personality disorder.

    I know how hard it is to try falling out of love...it makes falling in love look easy...and most people spend lifetimes looking for that special one.


    • ericalachea
      April 19, 2007
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      confused

      on your comment did you mean that you think i have multiple personality disorder or another girl you know?


  • ashmo09
    April 16, 2007

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    WONDERFUL write

    I really liked this poem! It kinda explains or tells what i'm going through with my ex....hmmmm....other than that GREAT write and keep up the work!


    • ericalachea
      April 19, 2007
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      thank you so much for your comment. this poem came straight from a relationship i am currently in...


  • elemental angel
    April 15, 2007

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    Aww... this cuts one a little emotionaly. You have expressed your feelings with razor sharpe precision... passion. Well done and thankyou for your honesty and expression.

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