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A Minute of Failure

A minute of failure
A lifetime of pain

So many choices
But only one mistake

For life to run off course
And dreams to die in vain

One minute of failure
One lifetime of pain

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  • Token Massacre
    April 15, 2007

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    While I agree with the comments that have been made already, the poem itself has an unfinished air about it. if you add to this please let me know. The impact is wonderful so I don't want it to be taken from that.

  • Life Messenger
    April 15, 2007

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    I agree with you. One false move can haunt you for the rest of your life. My suggestion is to live in the moment and forgive the past even though it is hard to do sometimes. Nice write and a your message is conveyed well in such a short poem. Keep on writing!


  • elemental angel
    April 15, 2007

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    ow, this is profound! You have said so much In so few words with this piece. It Is a wonderfully wise poem with depth and meaningful content.Well done.