Somebody loved me
and I truely thought
together forever
was more than an idea.
Somebody loved me
and I loved him
forever till always
so ideals thought.
Death never crossed my mind
why should it we're young.
It wasn't till today
I even thought to think
what'll he do if I'm gone
I guess I can only watch now.
From this place up above
simply I'm to young to die
but simply all we have is time.
Forever till always
that ring was buried on my hand
and in the ground it stayed.
Now I'm watching
forever till always
slowly slip away.
I want you to be happy
not sad the rest of you life
but I still want to great you
when you reach that large gate.
As you fall in love
I watch you fall apart
again and again and then
you found another
you took your time
then got a ring
similar to mine
she said yes
you tied the knot
fell more in love as kids came.
I watched from heaven
though the first birth
starting realize
time moved on on earth.
I was hoping he arrive
loving me all the same
but now I see he found love
proving forever till always
ends nomatter how you hope.
A contest entry
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500 points, ended April 18, 2007, 27 entries
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Good job and thank you for entering my contest! Good job and keep writing!
Erin200 -
Very nice very nice. I love your honesty and your repeating of Forever Till Always. I know that's your line and I'm glad you finaly got it in a poem.
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i really loved this one. I could relate to it. I hope you win the contest!!! Good Luck!!!
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