Once I walked right into that room
I knew my feelings were destined to be doomed
how I saw you laying there for hour's
and no words could come out as your left there to suffer
I could of been your voice cause I could be heard
but I sat there in silence and said no word
I just sat there and watched you leave my life
I remembered just that night
it was to late to make everything right
I'll never forget how I made you cry
and now your gone I wished it was a lie
I sat there and cryed gasping for breathe
I didn't know what to do now I'm full of seethe
to this day I regret so much on the pain I gave you
I just wished I could of done something different
It haunts me everyday and night
on why I never said my goodbye's
but I didn't know what to say
but as time and time past
I tried to find the words to fast
all I can say is I wish I found the way
to say my sorry for that day
so Rest In Peace cause now your gone
I don't know what to say, it just seems all wrong
~ Dedicated to my dad R.I.P
2/1/60 - 2/3/98
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Written July 16th, 2003
A contest entry
- Past Memories by SilverxXxShadow.
250 points, ended July 24, 2003, 27 entries
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Very touching and sad piece...and this is what I like...Well thanx for shareing and good luck in the contest ofcourse...
sajonara
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Yeah I remember reading this before....yesterday I believe it was. Anyways, I like it and it's very touching. This must be a hard memory to live with and I'm sorry. This is such an emotional piece. Thanks for entering...good luck.
Dieing Deep Within,
~Shadow
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