If we could save moments in time
I'd tell you I love you.
'cause it could be real
for and eternity (don't you see?)
We could keep it in a jar on the shelf,
and ode to the past.
So that when you love someone else,
i can still love you!
~
The growl in your voice
as you told me you hated me, made me smile
I could feel the pain in our voices,
I could hear hidden tears.
the Hate in your voice was strong
as you said "I'm sorry"(sorry sorry)
Not that sorry I'd say, baby!
don't you know you don't need to lie to me
cause on this shelf i've got all our memories.
I'm strong and i'm young
someone else'll come along
some-day!
~
if we could hold Moments In Time
I never would betray you
cause every I thought about it
I'd go back to a memory of you and me
and we'd be happy!
~
The growl in your voice
as you told me you hated me, made me smile
I could feel the pain in our voices,
I could hear hidden tears.
the Hate in your voice was strong
as you said "I'm sorry"(sorry sorry)
Not that sorry I'd say, baby!
don't you know you don't need to lie to me
cause on this shelf i've got all our memories.
I'm strong and i'm young
someone else'll come along
some-day!
~
Don't you know you don't need to lie to me? (mmm baby)
the growl in your voice
as you told me you hated me, made me smile.
the hate in your voice was strong
as you said "I'm sorry" (sorry sorry)
If We could save moments in time
I'd keep
The growl in your voice as you told me you hated me. BABY!
don't you know you don't have to lie to me (mmm baby)
The growl in your voice as you told me
told me
told me,
as you told me you hated me
as you said 'I'm sorry'.
If we could save moments in time.
Whoa, Baby.
Moments in time
in time
in time
in time
in time ____
Author notes
Song... uh, not normal for my style... but i like it, quick/slow love/hate relationship with the beat. lol. Crimson miseries Installment (again mentioned) the lightest to date. This one was inspired by my new crush >.< Damn steph for being so boy crazy... i think it rubbed off on me... *sigh* and no, for those who know me... not seph's steph, someone you probably don't know.
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My heart is my symphony
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Omg! this one is written so beautifully and the words the vocabulary is so decent and attractive. I love the choice of words and the amazing flow which makes it more pleasant to read. I just love the imagery and the emotions mingled with it..
Its a perfect one and beautifully written.
I love this one, great job!!!
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thanks, God bless
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Mansoor -
Great !
Hey, this is very close to s poem I wrote called A Snapshot in Time ! Have you read it ! Any ways a very good jobb here,keep up the great work.
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Very interesting indeed. I dont think i've ever come across another song like this before. Thats what makes it stand out to me, its originality. I liked it.
don't you know you don't need to lie to me
cause on this shelf i've got all our memories.
I'm strong and i'm young
someone else'll come along
some-day!
^^That was good!!! Thanks for entering my contest, good luck. Thanks for sharing, and keep on writing!!
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