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[ I smiled when I saw you last night ]

I smiled when I saw you last night
With your lovely, silky shirt
And the red ribbon you tied in your hair.

Then, you hugged me hello.
I didn't want that moment to end.
It was the most wonderful hug
So full of emotion
    happy
    excited
    calm
    soothing
    relaxing
Such a strong hug
Yet, so extremely tender.
It felt like you were holding me forever,
Even though it was less than a minute.

I was smiling to myself all night.
Then, I would look over
And see you standing there
Next to me.

I kept hoping that you would turn around
And take me in your arms
And hold me.

I'm still waiing for you to...
And I hope that you will soon.

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