I just want to tell you this
Since you came here,
I have missed
The feel of your touch,
The brush of your lips,
Your voice whispering so gently, its bliss.
To dance with your arms around me
To rest my head on your chest,
To just be held so close to you in your arms.
I just want to say
There is not a day
Where I don't think of you.
I dream of your arms around me
To dance with you again, is my wish
Just for another kiss.
I wish for another chance
To just hold your hand.
You are the one,
I miss...
Author notes
For my beloved prince, I love you Jacob.
For the contest: I have read the entire contest page.
A contest entry
- Passionate Poetry by Last Pixie.
300 points, ended June 12, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Aaaww, so tender. I AM jealous.
Have you read the new scientific evidence about 'swan' partners? Apparently one in ten couples each have a brain pattern which means they feel the same way about their partner forever... the same brain patterns are seen in birds, like swans, who partner for life. It doesn't just mean they are still in love, a lot of people still love their partners after 10 years, but it means they still thrill when they think of them, and count the seconds until they return.
I wish I was one of those couples, hope you are!
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not a day goes by when i dont miss being with him. Im at work and through the mess of working with 2 year olds my mind and thoughts wander to him, wondering how he is, what hes doing. waiting to talk to him. Missing the feeling of his arms around me, his hand on my cheek. and when i am alone late at night and need a calming thought i think of those moments.
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Such longing and hope for love's return in this write. You've got a very heartfelt and expressive piece here. Thanks for sharing.
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Very sweet and loving, and deep. I enjoyed this very much. I wish you the very best in this contest. ~Blessings to you always~
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AWWW
This was so sweet. You are such a tender hearted person with such great talent! Great work always and good luck. I loved the image that you created!!
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HOODWINKED!!
Awww, how sweet he must mean so much to you for you to write of him this way and so often. If I did not have my own love and do the same thing I would be jealous
Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. 
Hetohke'e 
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Hood-Wink!
This is absolutely precious...completely and totally precious, I hope your dreams and wishes come true and you get that dance you long for
Your words touched me with a little sadness but also of joy, in the memory you hold so dear to your heart...tenderly written, nice flowing freeverse, engaging and endearing
You have been hood-winked by a member of The Poetic Bandits
Love and smiles...
~Lilac
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Thank you for your entry
I like round robin affect where you end right back where you began. Lovely images. Good flow and a lot of warmth and love I feel in this.
Thanks for the read and good luck.
God Bless
Tammy -
awwww
this is a very good poem it is nicely written and meaningful it was also very heartfelt keep up the good work!
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wow!
this poem is beautiful.
so deepm and true.BRAVO!
♥
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that was really really cute! the only thing i wonder (which i kinda like wondering about, so i'm glad you didn't put it in the poem) is what happened that you miss him so? but, as i said, i really like the ambiguity of it. great piece. keep on writing!
XO,
~DN
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Beautiful!! Its soooo sweet, and it flows wonderfully! Great Write!
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its so sweet and well melodic
sings beautifully inside my head.
love it
SeeJ
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Beautiful mom
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Oh, that is absolutly beautiful... Truely.
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Wow...
this is really amazing
so deep and emotional
and i know exactly what you're going through.
im the same right now.
so i can relate so much.
great write...
im putting it on my author page.
<3Flo
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Elegant and beautiful every single time I read this. It touches my soul and moves me to tears. The flow, just everything in this: it's amazing. I feel unworthy of something so beautiful as this.
"the feel of your touch, the brush of your lips..." you have absoulutly encaptivated my mind and soul Beth. I feel as though I'm right there back in your loving embrace. The thoughts of when I took you in my arms as you shyly looked away as we danced and rocked in each other's arms; I feel like I've been transported body and heart right back to your couch.
I have no way to say how this makes me feel, words don't do justice, and emotions are all a flutter.
I love you
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