So close to kissing you
I barely held myself back
I knew I would regret it
Maybe even scare you away
I walked away
But you didn’t understand
You thought I was mad at you
[I’m sorry pretty girl]
So finally I told you
Speaking in third person, of course
I won’t admit it
I can’t say it
I was this close to kissing you
[I’m sorry, pretty girl]
Your lip out in a pout
Kiss it, make you feel better
I didn’t want to scare you away
And I would regret taking advantage of your
{innocence}
I can’t stand myself
Knowing you care
But not like that
Of course not like that
A beautiful girl
Who actually likes me
And
She’s
Straight
So close to kissing you
I barely held myself back
I don’t want to scare you away
Author notes
my luck is all bad....
{option one}
A contest entry
- Four topics, no rubbish 5-minute entries - by Speaking in Tongues.
450 points, ended April 19, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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what??
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you ask 'what' and applaud it..i am confused...
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im a little confused but its an awesome poem
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okay then...
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im not confused now and i know how u feel
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Confusing? Not so much. I understand, I think, although probably not to the full extent.
Tell you what, let me sleep for an hour, regain use of my brain, and I'll give you a real comment.
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this is confusing as hell...kinda but relly good
xX*Cheyenne*Xx*
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