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Sunkissed Escape

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Oh, island in the sun
Willed to me by my father's hand
All my days I will sing in praise
Of your forest, waters, your shining sand

From: Island In The Sun       Words & Music : Harry Belafonte & Lord Burgess



The springtime’s come, my hammock up, the warm sun on my face,

I stretch my weary body out, to seek my innerspace.

And as the warm breeze sooths my soul, my mind drifts far away,

To distant place where I was born, to Paradiso Bay.

The warm and glist’ning snow white sand that’s squeezed between my toes,

The fragrant Bougainvillea whose aroma fills my nose.

I taste the milk of coconuts, papayas, passion fruit,

And feast on newly roasted fish and fresh cassava root.

With belly full and satisfied, I rest beneath the palms,

The breeze that murmurs through the fronds is whispering a psalm

The words of which I’ve memorized, the sacred sounds of life,

That oft have soothed my troubled heart when overwhelmed by strife.

The shimm’ring water, turmoil free, protected by the reef

Beckons to my wearied soul, "Come in and find relief."

The rock of wonder fills my eyes, how long since I’ve been there?

Warm mem’ries of my youth o’erwhelm and catch me unaware.

Unable to resist the call, there’s soon a salty taste

As aching muscles, long unused, stroke t’ward that distant place.

The swimming and the water’s feel bring back a life long gone,

As water, wind, and island birds sing out an antiphon.

The shore draws near and then at last, I’m standing in the sun,

My back to where I just came from , my future just begun.

For this is where it all began, what no one really knows,

Because ‘twas on this giant rock I saw the tropical rose.

Exhausted by the half-mile swim, my muscles strained and sore,

And yet invigorated, knowing that I must explore.

I press through all the undergrowth and climb the craggy slope,

For e’en at only eight years old my heart was filled with hope.

Overwhelmed by breathlessness, I’m high as I can go,

And right before my sweat-burned eyes I sense a rad’ent glow.

The brilliant pink that’s rustling in the gentle south sea breeze

Enchants me with it’s loveliness and drops me to my knees.

I’m reaching out to pluck it loose but something stays my hand.

The flower seems to smile at me, to help me understand

That precious beauty and its life is not for us to take.

It’s there to share with everyone and lives for its own sake.

In awe, I sit for hours there, until the light grows dim.

Reluctantly then down the slope, I face the half-mile swim.

I stroke across the channel’s breadth, lit softly by the moon,

With satisfying feelings that my life is now attunded.

The island quickly disappears, the beach and palm trees too,

And as I crack a sleepy eye, a dream comes into view.

Her voice is soft and filled with love, for she most surely knows

That she’s the flower that I sought, my island tropical rose.

Author notes

Another collaboration with Reni. She did this painting one night when she couldn't sleep, just to pass the time. She's amazing indeed.

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  • Ellis gold member
    December 6, 2007
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    Outstanding

    I got goosebumps at this point:

    "The flower seems to smile at me, to help me understand"


  • Mrs Mulholland
    May 31, 2007
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    When I read the words of Island in the Sun so many memories came back! I was but a little girl when it was Top of The Pops! And I was so innocent then! But not now! But your poem itself is very innocent and charming, conjuring up the warmth of the tropics. Well done!


  • catz Moderators member
    April 21, 2007

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    Okay, what's with this... each time a read one of these picture inspired poems it becomes my favorite...for sure this time.

    What a romantic tale you've woven here, Paul, a fantasy, a dream, the real thing... let the imagination decide.

    I want to go to that place in this poem... but I'll go by rowboat, I'd never make it swimming

    A divine piece, a wonderful painting to inspire the soul, Paul. The two of you have done it again


    Dee


  • Shapla
    April 16, 2007
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    This is awsome.


  • Zephyr Aryn
    April 16, 2007

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    This sounds so good-then again, it would sound good to anyone else who happens to live in Wisconsin. We still got some snow in April, for goodness sake!


  • Debbysmiles gold member
    April 16, 2007

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    Now.. this beautiful piece allowed me to drift away and rest within it's peace.. Sweet, sweet words. AND, the art.. is breathtaking. Thank you both for allowing me to read and see such wonder ! God bless.. Debby


  • John Timothy Bailer
    April 16, 2007

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    the imagery in this poem is amazing, i just had a free little mini vacation to a tropical island. well done! i also love the rhyme and rhythm and meter in this piece, it flows exceedingly well. thanks so much for sharing this, keep up the great work! Timmy B. aka Child Of The Night


  • StarEyes
    April 16, 2007

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    WOW!!!!!!!! What a picture your words paint! and the painting itself! Amazing!!! I love it!!! But tell me, where are you that you are getting that spring weather? We are still getting snow and rains and everything that goes with winter!!! yikes!!! Keep that pen flowing!!!!!!!


  • Gatlianne
    April 16, 2007
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    indeed


  • Ishtar
    April 14, 2007

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    I'm almost upset that the poem is over, and now I'm back in the melancholy state that was provoked by my defeat by that biology exam. Blugh.

    As always, I loved reading this. I love sitting here reading what you see when you look at something i drew, and then I try to make comparisons between what I was seeing when I was making it.

    Sometimes the same feelings and moods are there, but you always end up surprising me.

    For instance, Reni didn't forsee that ending AT ALL.

    Again, lovely working with you, sir.

    Clappy fools for a very deserving poem and a very talented poet!

    - Reni, the granddaughter-ish.


  • Mrs.Snowflake
    April 14, 2007
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    applaud...

    ok i forgot to put my applaud in...

  • Mrs.Snowflake
    April 14, 2007

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    Breathtaking

    As always, your write has been a blessing to read, and now, you are paired with an amazingly talented artist as well, you are simply wonderfull and the write is amazing! Great job yet again!


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 14, 2007

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    Wow. Beautiful. The flow and rhythm is wonderful. I loved the story you pulled me into immediately. You are so talented. Just a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing two talented artists so beautifully.

    Jeannie


  • Veronica Leigh
    April 14, 2007

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    wow Grandpa Paul, I don't even know what to say to this! This is incredibly beautiful. It's such a sweet story and everything was just perfect in it! Really gracefully written as always. I LOVE this one! I really felt as if I was there!

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