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Shapes Of Life

My wisdom within
Give me visions
Of my daily life
Inside my quiet mind
With landscapes
And colors spread
Then sprinkled
Into shapes of life
That I follow
Daily, with the sun

A contest entry

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  • XxMysticalFantasyxX
    April 27, 2007

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    Beautifully done..this is a short poem but very well written this was very great to read and you are very talented I cant wait to read some more of your poems...keep on writing and good luck in this contest!!


  • aphrodite-redentor
    April 14, 2007

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    tres cool

    Anything that sounds like it could be deftones lyrics emits a fuzzy and stimulating vibe to me. Nice work