milk-white runs the blood in her veins
unconcernedly lays the angel girl
spring pulses in her heart
should innocence not flicker in her eyes?
her breath flutters like lace in the wind
even the fireflies catch in her beauty
hair pale as moonlight is splayed out as she sleeps
hours of days of years tumble by
will you love the angel girl too?
Please tell me what you think
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Lovely words, especially "her breath flutters like lace in the wind. Well done.
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Thanks so much- I wrote a story using a character like this (its titled "Angel Girl", how ironic?) and during that I kept writing poems about her. This was one of them! I have more poems on my page under my stories, if your interested. (:
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Beautiful
By the description, she sounds very beautiful.The poem was very descriptive.
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Thank you- sorry I didn't reply sooner! I just realized you could reply. lol sorry i'm a blonde.
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great
ily girl. you are such a poet! -
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Thnx
ILY2
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