In a dark and fog filled
parking lot stands a
man cloaked in an
all red garment.
Blood has been smeared
around his mouth. Dried blood
crusts off his lips and falls to the
ground.
The moon disappears, completely dark.
the Earth trembles as hell rises out deepest
depths of the Earth. The fire from hell burns everything
it comes in contact, but the devil is ignorant that Jesus
has already come for his people.
Barren the earth sits, the devil has lost the
ultimate battle.
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A contest entry
- Use one of these pictures for inspiration by Mel-the-Believer.
420 points, ended April 15, 2007, 8 entries
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A very commanding spiritual write, poet. I like the picture you have accompanied with it as well, because, due to your imagery, which was well done by the way, the reader could place the man you mentioned and then have him fade away. Amazing write.
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wonderful
I really like this a lot, and enjoyed reading it. you are a very good. Keep on writing.I am going to go now so I can read your other poems. God bless.
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Another dimension,thought provoking.
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CONGRATULATIONS on winning the Silver. This was a wonderful poem and deserved to one of the winners. Beautiful and heartfelt You take care, Sandy
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This was a wonderful poem. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you very much for entering. Good luck. Keep on writing. God Bless!
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wow what an amazing imagery filled poem well done this is an amazing poem good luck in the contest xxx
laura xxx
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