Times running out on me
People left I am now alone
I guess this is it
I guess its the end...
The clock ticks as my mind races
I wish this all over...
Wish it was done
Im tired of fighting...
Fighting myself
Fighting the world
Oh how i wish...
But its all a game
And its all done now...
You dont know my name
Dont know who I am
Yet you killed my soul
My heart and my mind...
The clock ticks once more...
I take my last breath...
And i die...
Author notes
The first picture....
Ok, so this is really rambled and I am pretty sure i dont like it... but its up in the air... opinions please!
A contest entry
- Image Contest by silverscent.
360 points, ended April 19, 2007, 9 entries
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Ok I see how you incorporated the image; it was certainly different to any other entry. However, I think it came a cross a little erm.. melodramatic, especially the final line. I wasn't too keen on that.
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So dark, M. Very expressive though.
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haha... me plus dark.... its not a new thing. I dont usually post my dark stuff tho... Its ok i guess.... the more i read it the more i dont like it lol
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