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window

stairing out the stained glass window
snowflakes obscuring the pattern
fractured light playing on marble floors and the stone dias
but it means nothing
the long night keeps me moving
here in this sanctuary
this place of refuge
outside the raging wind can no longer pull at me
force me to struggle through again

its been a long road
but i have made my way to here
and now i see
that i can make it
i can make it through
i've got faith
that i can make it through

i turn my eyes back to the empty sanctuary
my sanctuary
of stained glass and sculpture
crucifixes and cassocks
the weeping eyes of a man on a tree
the silent walls of stone
and me alone in it

candlelight flickers off the walls and i realize
in this moment
i could fly

Author notes

this poem is kind of the fusion of a couple themesongs. 

 

the main song is "where my heart will take me (faith of the heart)" by russell watson; it's the theme from star trek enterprise.

http://www.startreksoundtracks.com/lyrics/sts-lyrics-wheremyheart.html

 

the second is "sanctuary" by utada hikaru; the theme from the video game kingdom hearts 2.

http://www.lyrics4all.net/u/utada/u/sanctuary.php

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  • Arycan
    April 14, 2007

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    nice work. I like it alot. I love the images in the poem, it really paints a nice picture on things.


  • suzume
    April 14, 2007

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    That's a very beautiful poem. And I love that Utada song. I particularaly like the second to last stanza. It's a really pretty image.

    • nanashiamai
      April 15, 2007
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      thank you so much. ^_^ i really like this one for some reason. and i love that song too. holy crap do i love that song.


  • KenjiStar81
    April 14, 2007
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    This went really deep.. Good luck with the contest..

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