A door open and inviting
first foot and then leg
and body step through
Beyond threshold and knobs
perceptions and fears
and fluttering heart beats
Familiarity in sound
yet some how different
~kcit~kcit~kcit~
The very sight
and smell of you
winds back time
and
I hardly recognized
the subtle change
when time stopped all together
Author notes
Image number one
A contest entry
- Image Contest by silverscent.
360 points, ended April 19, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You've said your inspiration is from number one which is clear in the end, but I can't help thinking there are hints of image #3 in there too...
Your matter of fact and simple language worked well here I think. I also liked the sound references "kcit..."
Thanks for entering. -
Very good write - love the first stanza!
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