plain town voodo doll clings again
pain crowds cum to player when
has bone told you she's hot breathing?
well hold, climb your vine, giving you someone to stalk chew
telephone.
kif! I try coconut creme;
soon caramel shake luscious dream
don't try to steal me dime; Have a token!
Well hold Inez' pie chicken formula you abide
don't jive!
suddenly thy moan's hot, weeping
jello chai inhale,
all that's left of crème brûlée.
Author notes
Inspired or deconstructed and re-assembled "Hello" by Evanescence.
I tried to give you a pair of these, but you wanted execrescence. Please be as cruel and harsh as you feel you need to be.
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to be honest, i think it could use a little work. my favorite lines are:
"well hold, climb your vine"
"telephone"
"i try coconut creme"
"don't try to steal me dime, have a token"
"don't jive"
the last stanza
also love the title
other than that, the wording is iffy. keep working on it though, and message me when you think you've got an improvement!!
(don't give up on this, the ideas are good)
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