I try to see the best in people.
If it does not pop right out at me, I go searching for it.
Do you know how long I've been searching your soul?
Do you know how little I've found?
Sure, don't get me wrong, you are a great person.
But where is that special quality that is uniquely yours?
*She always makes me happy and makes the best out of a situation
He always makes me smile
She is always making people feel better about themselves
She offers up her services when ever necessary
She makes beautiful music every chance possible
She makes helping people look easy*
But for you I have to search deep inside,
You're kind of like the song, "I can see through you"
But all I see is a gray cloud, A cloud that never seems to lift off of your face.
When I look into your eyes I see the gray cloud looming in the darkness.
Waiting for a day to come when everyone will give up on you, just like you did long ago.
Waiting so it can surround you and eat away at your mind, and make you lose hope in the world.
As long as you believe in your self you will never fade away. Your true beauty will shine through the cloud of hate and destruction.
And finally I will be able to, "See your true colors".
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Written January 4th, 2002
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this is very well written, i was totally intrigued, and it was definitely very good, i liked it a lot, good job
kayla* -
hmmm i c....i agree with those above..a bit harsh but i dont know whom this is about so i cant say that it'z unjustful. good write.
~the moj -
wooooooooo......dont jump to that conclusion paul
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I guess you don't like her then.
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Wow, this is kind of harsh don't you think, probably someone I know.
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