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Mad world; Voices unheard

Even though it's over
And our love had ended
I can still feel him
And remember him

'All around me are familiar faces
Warn out faces
Warn out places
Bright and early for the daily races
Going no where
Going no where
The tears are filling up their glasses
No expression
No expression
Hide my head I wanna drown my sorrow
No tomorrow
No tomorrow'

Arms wrapped around me
Swaying back a forth
Lips part and sing
The light whisper

'I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
The dreams in which I'm dying
Are the best I've ever had
I find it hard to tell you
I find it hard to take
When people run in circles it's a very very....

Mad world...
Mad world...'

His voice echoing through my head...
A whisper from behind my ear...
Echoing in the chambers of my heart...
Stirring the memories...
Stirring the feelings that were.....
And I know then for sure
That when I told him that I loved him
I did mean it

'It's a very very mad world....'

 

Author notes

For Andrew whom I once loved. And i truly did. I do still hear him singing 'Mad World' to me everytime i listen to this song.. the voice of Gary Jules and his mix together... so strange.

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  • WhenWillsCollide
    April 17, 2007

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    nice abbi...this is so sad....all the drama taht this problem has caused and the reaction of both parties...in cluding me...
    better of the luck to you...
    alway- lee! <3

  • Headstrong2TakeUOn
    April 14, 2007

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    pathetic

    its wonderful u remember him before you annihilated any feelings he had for you whatsoever and i greatly appriciate you being a bitch and/or whore to a best friend of mine, and all in all this is a crappy poem because quoting a song is useless especially the way you did it because almost the entire poem is the song therefore not even anywhere near original, the word choice is also useless, the poem does not flow anywhere but where the song was inserted