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Rest In Peace

She's dead, gone...
They told me to be brave,
But I was too busy digging her grave

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  • Atrophya
    May 21, 2007

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    wow... hun are you alright? You seem quite sad. I hope all is well, if ever you need someone reliable to talk to and GutterTrashxx-my wife!!- isn't on, you can always talk to your sister in law, lol, or a friend, me. I'm here for you. I'll listen and then we can both be all emo over our lives!! lol. love ya brother in law!!Lol!!^-^


  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    April 14, 2007

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    wow.. short and sharp.. like a knife in the stomach..
    this is soo good.. so much packed into 3 lines...

    wow...

    *lost for words*


  • X-xKillLifex-X
    April 14, 2007

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    jesus... this is very hard hitting... 4 lines.. (including title) and it affected me more than all the loonngggg poems people feel the need to write, people like me. This was absolutely amazing


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 13, 2007

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    Oh very dark and emotion driven. The mind boggles.

    Thanks for sharing... x

    Love and light,
    Butterfly.