Have drink come and sit down
Turn that frown upside down
Sit with me and tell me all
Let those sad tears to fall
Run into my outstreched arms
Lets sit by the fireplace warm
Lets go for a walk in the park
Tell me if you need to talk
Lets go to the mall buy things
Eat out and do everything
Paint each other nails right
Watch movies up all night
Do each others hair and face
Lets make this a party place
Invite some friends and more
Lets have a party galore
Tell my your dreams too
I'll tell you the truth
Lets have some fun and shout
Lets have a girls night out.
Author notes
I don't know if this poem goes. Its pretty short but i thinks it nice for her.
A contest entry
- Help Me Cheer Up My Daughter by Viyanna Rosemarie.
600 points, ended May 6, 2007, 11 entries
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Comments
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Flowed very nicely, but I see the absence of words or punctuation -- something that makes all of these thoughts rather fragmented. Anyway, good luck to you in the contest.
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i would like to thank you for this entry into the contest for my daughter. i wish you the best of luck. viyanna rosemarie
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I love it! It makes me want to get all my gal pals together right now...at 11:11 in the morning...for a girls night/day out/in....I like the length, it gets the point and the image across nicely...good luck in the contest!
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