to much alike or to little apart, either way they have broken hearts.
secrets are held and stories are told, both afraid to let go.
her pain is deep and his as well, each of them still dwell.
the past has come and gone, but stayed in their eyes with pain a glow.
behold inside a trust is told, not many cared but all was shared.
never did they see or know that this is something that won't let go.
hanging on to the memories, about to fall they take that one step to their future.
she lets go and he beholds, all that was isn't anymore,their free.
she flies in the wind, he swims in the sea, they burn in the flames and are now both free.
Author notes
this poem i wrote on June 8, 2006.
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A contest entry
- ANY THING by serenity silvermoon.
430 points, ended May 10, 2007, 145 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Really!!!!!! by LuverzTearz.
550 points, ended July 13, 2007, 24 entries
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Oooh I like it. It's nice bceause it explains the torture of trying to let go and then the freedom of finally breaking free. Now if more of us would be able to get to the breaking free part.. it would be easier to understand the feeling behind it. Thanks for adding this to the group! =]
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thank you for reading my poem. i'm glad you liked it
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Great poem! Thank You for entering and good luck!I will be considering your poem during judging!
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i remember this poem. it's from when we started dating.it was amazing then and it still is now. i like the part bout flying and swimming.
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kool....i am happy you like this cuz its about us
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to much to little to late to try again i can't remember when we both still fell the same way but i still feel the same as i use to before and after i met you and until this day i love you in my heart and everyday i imagine you in my dreams and when i'm on my way
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Nice.
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thank you
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