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hidden tears

I hold in my crys
I never wanted to say my good byes
It just happened so soon
Now I lay awake looking up at the moon
The stars are shining so bright
I turned off my bedroom light
The day is gone away
I have nothing anyway
I left with just a broken heart
But its filled with so much art
You would think that I would be sad
You would think that i should be mad
But i feel this sort of peace
That helps me to unfreeze
I look at the sky
Waving high
Jesus tells me everything will be fine
He will lend me a helping dime
I can now sleep
I have already eat
I need to brush my teeth with crest
Then get my self alot of rest
I have a long day ahead of me
Cuz tomorrow will be
The day that I
Will say Bye

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  • udontnome
    April 16, 2007

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    omg britannie!! this is sad!! but the part bout Jesus is true, everything will be fine and he, and us, will help u in any way that we can. iloveyou!!

    Caitlin

  • RedRose12
    April 14, 2007
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    That's so sad! It almost made me cry.