I had no clue
what it would be like
to love
someone
the way
I love you ~~~
I never imagine
such a dream
could come true
now I see
with eyes wide open
my dream
everyday
of my life
in you ~~~
With every breath
I take
with every beat
of my heart
I thank you
for being a part
of me ~~~
When you truly
love someone
you feel it
deep in the core
of all that you are
I am you
you are me
we are one ~~~
In love ~~~
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Hi Joyce,
This is simply...gorgeous. You've captured true love so beautifully, written about it so convincingly. If anyone deserves this kind of love, it is you, my friend.
Much love,
~J.
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Wonderful work again, a touching message of love spilled from your heart onto the page and easily absorbed by the reader. Loved this
Keep up the good work! Always a pleasure to read your work ~Tia
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I'd give you hope
But I've lost it myself
What was once my strength, is now my weakness
and It doesn't get easier reading about true love
I Love You
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looks as if we both lost hope,
but at least we still have each other.
love you granny
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Just reading again
Rick -
Wow, when you find someone that makes you feel this way, it makes your heart and life complete. This is something that we all search for in life. Glad that you found that special someone for you! Thanks for sharing this!
Jeremy0826
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jeremy
i have searched for this kind of love it seems all my life, and still haven't found it yet. but i will never give up. sorry to say that my special someone is still out there hiding from me LoL.
thanks so much for your very nice comment. i can always count on you for being so nice to me. you are the best.
manyblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Excellent x2
This is totally beautiful
from begining to end
Love the ending
this
When you truly
love someone
you feel it
deep in the core
of all that you are
I am you
you are me
Rick
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rick:
thanks for reading not just once but twice.
i am glad you think it is beautiful.
manyblessings2u & yours always
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