Blood scattered upon the floor,
Blood splattered upon the walls and door,
Blood on the razor in my cold lifeless hand,
Blood on my radio playing death metal bands,
Blood upon my cold pale face,
The meaning of life,
Is hard to embrace,
When your dead.
In a list
A contest entry
- Short and Sweet by Tablet Of Essence.
360 points, ended May 13, 2007, 3 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Well darling I like this very much & I thank you so much.
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i love the name it fits the words and rithom well
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wow!
its really good, its short but deep -
wow!
this is pretty good. i like it. i really dont know what else to say other than it is really good.
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this is a really good write! its short but good some short poems dont sound very good or dont mean anything but this hits you like a small brick
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GREAT!!!!
I love this poem. it shows how we are all haunted by ourselves and people need to know that. great job ^_^
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