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I wish you would hear the words I say for what they really mean,
I wish you seen my fears for what they realy are,

Im paranoid of losing the people I love,
no assurance they will always be there,

I wish you would tell me how you really felt about me,
and see I am not as weak as a i look.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Xxpoison.kissesxX silver member
    May 10
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    hah, this reminds me of something i wrote. lol. but nice write here

  • Topnotchsy
    May 1

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    The first two lines are really powerful, and I think they say what "they really mean" quite well. I can relate to this poem so well. Nice write.

    There's a spelling error "really" in line two.


  • Beauty Of Silence
    April 22

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    wow. this was full of emotions!

    i am paranoid of losing the ones i love too. its just scary! and i love that this was short, and just so powerful! great write!


    • Polar.bear.king
      April 22
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      Hey

      Actually it wasnt so bad losing this person but thats for a private convo. But thank you for your words!


  • caged-inside
    December 13, 2007

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    i love it

    its true some people never reallly hear what your saying. i like it its short but it actually is really deep. keep on writng i love it.

    • Polar.bear.king
      December 14, 2007
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      wow, that was an old one haha. i dont remember writing it but i do remember what i was going through. thanks for reading it. i see no one else has haha.

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