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my good ol' friend MISTER COCKROACH!

So I knew this cockroach
And he soooooo wasn’t my friend
He wouldn’t go away
Even though I tried to flush him down the drain
His fucking stinky ass breath wouldn’t blow away
So I then decided I needed a more powerful spray
To get rid of his horrid odor of gay and dismay
I tried and tried but damn he must like me
CUZ HE WONT GO AWAY!

Author notes

haha well... lets just say theres an analogy that i had came with on this topic and if u would like to know just message or comment me and ill be sure to explain it in the best way i know how to... haha enjoy my weirest poem yet... haha

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  • Lyric Serrenia
    May 11, 2007

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    OMG

    I CANT BELIEVE U ACTUALLY PUT IT ON HERE!!!!

    hehe, now I'm going to start making cockroach jokes AGAIN!!!!!


  • Decorus Somnium
    April 19, 2007
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    Hahaha yeah this is weird. AND funny too.


  • Xxthe angry gothxX
    April 15, 2007

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    well my first thought was wtf *blink blink* i thought it was funny though. but yeah, deffinately weird to say the very least. good work to say though!!

    • hanhan1026
      April 15, 2007
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      YEAHHH!

      hahahaha! thanks... i know im goofy and crazy but that poem made me feel great! haha yeah i came up with the idea that my ex is like a cockroach in MANY ways... sooo i decided to write a poem about it... HAHAHA!

  • clulesgamdgirl
    April 13, 2007

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    I HATE COCKROACHES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    lol funny poem, gotta love weird poems too *wink wink*

    kudos!

    gracie

    • hanhan1026
      April 13, 2007
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      haha thanks... well technically it wasnt bout a cockroach but it was about how i compared someone to a cockroach because i HATE COCKROACHES 2! hahaha but thank you for the comment! it is much appreciated!

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