I'm not sure where to start,
my trust was torn apart,
and now i am being blamed,
told to feel ashamed.
I thought I was being a friend,
and a hurt I tried to mend.
I said the words that I said,
that where totally misread.
I did care and words where true,
thinking I was being a friend to you.
Boy was I a fool,
you used me like a tool.
Only hearing what you wanted to hear,
you where never sincere,
now you've lied again,
creating another hurtful chain.
I can't proove what really went on,
now my friends have gone.
I dont want to care anymore,
never like I did before.
A friend tore my trust apart,
took advantage of my heart,
and I am left to blame,
like my life is just a game.
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A contest entry
- Title contest. by forget my memories.
800 points, ended April 24, 2007, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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nice poem! this had a lot of feelings in it! I liked the first two lines of the last stanza "a friend tore my trust apart, took advantage of my heart". the rhyming sounds really nice throughout the poem. well done, keep up the good work congrats on getting silver <3 *Jordan**
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Very strong emotion in this one. I think you have penned a great write here and it flowed really well. Good luck in the contest
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Wow. I dont know what else to say. That was great, everything from the meaning, the flow and the ryhm. It was so well thought out and just the type of poem I love to read. Great job! Thank you so much for making my contest just a little bit better.
♥sam
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