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Don't Wait

Don't wait for the hope to pass you by
As the grains of sand pass through your failing fingers
Grip a little tighter and pray a little harder
To find all that you've been looking for
For there is no world without hope
And no life without love,
Though loneliness may seem to plague
There is always that one person waiting for you,
Waiting for you to look their way...

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I haven't wrote anythign towards the lighter side of life in awhile.. so here we go...

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  • Apsinthion
    April 14, 2007

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    "For there is no world without hope
    And no life without love,"

    great bright poem.. full of positive thoughts
    it's gd to look at the brighter side of life frm time to time lol.. we might b surprised

    great job..

    ~rana~





  • forget my memories
    April 13, 2007
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    Grip a little tighter and pray a little harder
    To find all that you've been looking for

    I love those lines it made my contest start off great. thank you so much for entering. and goood luck. Thank you so much for sharing you words with me.

    ♥sam


  • NeverLoseHope
    April 13, 2007

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    I really loved this poem, it was really powerful. The message was also a really great one too, more people should embrace the idea of hope. Your imagry was also good.

    "As the grains of sand pass through your failing fingers
    Grip a little tighter and pray a little harder"

    Congratulations on a very uplifting and inspiring poem, keep it up!