Midnight’s haunting breeze
has seized my breath...
pausing
with your verse
upon my thighs,
moaning
subtle whispers
of your surge
I feel your chorus,
gliding through pale silk
to ashen skin,
arcing
in the echo of my curve,
singing
summer’s solo
…through my thread
~
April 13, 2007
Author notes
Painting: Heaven's Song, artist, Jai Lu
A contest entry
- Devilish Delight by Sensual Sapphire.
875 points, ended April 22, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Such a class act you are with your poetic art, this just brings the reader to new hights with your use of lovely imagery. I love this poem, don't change a thing sweet soul. Thanks always for sharing your wonderful works!
Much love, Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo 
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Silk threaded verse weaves it's way through the whispered low song this piece creates.Very soft and subtile metaphores used. Nice work.
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