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HAHAHA Got another one

I told her that her mom hated her
She said "whatever thats not true"

I told her that She is a slut and cant change
She said "But I only did it that one time"

I told her that she was fat
She said "Maybe i can lose another 50 pounds"

I told her that if she told someone they wouldnt care
She said " I know"

I told her that i knew a way her pain could leave
She said "How"

I told her to take all her mom's pills
She said " I cant do that she might miss me"

I told her that that being pain free was better
She said " I will write a note"

I Told her to hurry up because some could stop her
She said "ok"

I told her goodnight
She couldnt say anything she was gone

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  • HinatasShyLove
    July 5, 2007
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    WOW
    its a really good poem its just dark. . .really dark