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"Gods Show"

I could not believe my eyes it was

snowing on Easter! it truly knocked

me right on my keester!  The stage

was set and this you can bet God

 

Has really put on a very beautiful

show.   In the middle of April he

brought us snow! instead of getting

Easter eggs ready we were throwing

snowballs pretty steady.  All the family

is gathered around so much love on

this glorious snowy ground.

 

 

Get set and ready cause they are eggs

to be found, the kids are scrambling around

like a lost herd of sheep looking for eggs

and those little candy peeps.  So much fun

to be had and the snow is not so bad for it

will quickly melt away but not right now not

today.  I am going to end on this note and God

I just want to let you know you always have

                     my vote. 

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  • learn2luv4real
    June 19, 2007

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    lovely imagery, i had to read twice cus i wasnt too sure i got the right message at the first instance. its real a nice piece


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    April 23, 2007

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    Dynamic

    This is dynamically captivating.... I just love it.... Easter here was freezzzzing...........colder than Christmas... This is the cutest poem I've read in a very long time.. I am always captivated by your unique presentation....it is all your own... Your trade mark so to speak... I enjoy reading your work... It is always uplifting to me and my soul... You, your mom and your words have brought a happiness to me when I read your words.....Keep on typing.............Please...........
    Joy    Smile    Smile   Smile


  • PastelMoons gold member
    April 19, 2007

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    Your words are like sunshine..your joy is contagious..not to mention your writing, it is exceptional! Absolutely charming and inspiring ~Pastel


  • my life end 5-6-06
    April 19, 2007
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    i love it

    i love it your great


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 18, 2007

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    Brilliant Piece of writing

    What a brilliant piece of writing this is. Great imagery here. I love the flow and rhyme of the piece. I could see everything that was going on here. Snowing At Easter? Wow. That must have been something to see? Anyway, well done for this great piece of writing. Keep writing and do not stop. God does work in mysterious ways.

    Wayne


  • SweetRoses
    April 16, 2007

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    Great write! It was very shocking when is suddenly went from being beautiful and nice out to snowing on Easter. Great write. Very nicely done.


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    April 15, 2007

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    how awesome

    You could have had so much fun having a popsicle hunt instead I loved the read and the true to life story. I have always thought these types of persoonal experience poems are the best. God bless you, Mark


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    April 15, 2007
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    enjoyable

    a good read to uplift us at easter ..bringing memories of snow here well done


  • Inside and out
    April 14, 2007

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    A truly uplifting poem. It is nice to read a poem that is filled with joy and true appreciation. Well done my friend.


  • Laura
    April 14, 2007

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    this is beautiful you truly are growing in skill with every poem you write love....can we have some more please?????????? laura xxxxx

  • Bob Fox
    April 14, 2007

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    lol

    & a late Happy Easter to you. sounds like you had fun. warm wonderful write. & ty for your kind comment


  • Poetic-Goddess
    April 14, 2007

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    Yeah we a few cm ourself too
    Hard to believe in canada
    No snow on x-mas
    But some snow on easter
    Great write!!!!!

  • Topaz
    April 13, 2007

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    Awesome!

    We had an inch of snow our way! A very up-lifting poem for a spiritual holiday. A memory you can read and treasure each Easter.

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