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System Error (an annoyed triolet)

Today my bank debit card wouldn't pay
The little bill at the till in the shop.
I just wanted the problem to (cash)flow away!
Today my bank debit card wouldn't pay
And the queue behind wanted me on my way:
Watch my face go red and my confidence drop!
Today my bank debit card wouldn't pay
The little bill at the till in the shop.



Author notes

Wasn't my fault! Visa had a big, Europe-wide problem apparently. Still annoying when you have to put back everything you wanted to buy because you have no cash on you...
And I'm on a mission to crack this triolet thing.

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  • Zero the Hero silver member
    April 15, 2007
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    cool

    COol triolet with about a not so cool thing well done