The pages of my book, The pages of my life
Ripped into a million shreds and pieces.
Torn from the life I loved, torn from the home I knew.
Listen to the sound of the rips, the tears, the hurt.
Morning. Noon. then comes Night.
The blackness, it surrounds me. Its everywhere.
My vision is blurred. Ink runs.
The pages are soiled and water-stained.
I am gone.
Today, I woke up. I thought it was over, no more chances.
But God ruined that theory. And for that I am grateful.
My sun. He came shining through. Me joy, my everything. The opaque, cold darkness was turned into a cloudless morning sky. Birds and Flowers and all.
You took all those ripped shreds, and made something of them.
You. Saw beyond all my mistakes and flaws.
*add more later*
Author notes
Please Comment, this is only my rough draft.
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this is great. i loved it. i thought it was excellent. all the words just being torn apart. great comparison.
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why thank you a ton!!
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HOLY SMOKES!!!! What a read this one is darling!! I love it!!! I wanted to cry, in the beginning then you turned it around and it was sooooo loving and full of hope! WOW!!! This is amazing!!!
Love it, but love you more!
Loves ya
Mom
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i like how it rymes and how it incorperates nature and stuff
very good!!!!!!!!
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