Loosing connection
My eyes are gaining weight
The strength that I had, to hold onto
Is in a fatal state
Dreams leave me confused as ever
And I'm forced to find my own truth
Love is all around, as never
And as always, uncouth
In a list
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sometimes we don't know if we are better off dreaming or awake. sometimes the two options are not what we want, still we have to take both of them and take our dreams (or nightmares) the way they come to us.
just eight lines, yet a very complete poem.
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Awwwwwwww dreams. Tempting little devils aren't they. They have me dreaming about things that I could have gotten had things gone *my way*...hm. Well...that can't happen because it's a dream. Lovely poem you've got here.
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i like this because now i'm thinking about dreams. waking dreams and sleeping dreams. they are both capable of inspiring confusion. especially when matters of the heart are explored in the dream world. dreams can be aspirations, hopes, goals. wishes. longings. fears. fantasies. and how do you reconcile a fantasy with reality? it's a hard task to take on, and MUCH confusion results. ahhh, i digress....
the last two lines of your second stanza are by far my favorite.
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