Shards of glass fall from the sky,
as I sit alone and cry.
The shards cut in my skin,
and I know it will again,
Leave me broken on the floor,
as it always has before.
Your sympathy's not there,
and no one seems to care.
My blood soaks in the ground,
as you slowly watch me drown.
You'll watch me drift away,
not wishing I could stay.
Deeper in the shards will go,
as my blood will finally loose its flow.
I'll die here right before your feet,
as you watch my hearts last beat.
Author notes
Option like 2 i guess Ruth.
It's Erin!
A contest entry
- 12 options now wow! by BeautifullyBroken42.
410 points, ended January 29, 2008, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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wow thats really all i can say erin! It it BRILLIANT and i'm not saying that cuse i have to. I mean it!
You'll watch me drift away,
not wishing I could stay.
Deeper in the shards will go,
as my blood will finally loose its flow.
great job and good luck!
~Ruth~ -
scary
havnt you ever written any happy poems? but good. -
Thanks rierrah!
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very dark. and very good. you;'re a great poet!
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