Let me see your deep brown eyes again,
Let me hear your sweet voice over phone
I am sorry I hurt you please do not go away.
Things are not just same without you...
You know that I love you.
A contest entry
- FORGIVE ME? by yourbentangel.
400 points, ended April 16, 2007, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Sweetest thing by VictorianGrace.
440 points, ended May 10, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i would be lying if i say that it is one of your best... the best is yet to come keep writing... -
MMM... expression is very beautiful. A simple and yet impressive poem
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The poem is brief but it gives the message.A good poem.
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thank you so much
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You cooled down and wanting to hear the voice again.The voice will be much sweeter than earlier.The earlier it is a voice, now it will be a music..Keep on hearing to yours heart content
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I can really relate to the deep brown eyes and wanting to hear the voice. If I had the guts this is what I would write when asking someone that I love very much for forgivness.. I am not that brave yet!
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