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My wife

A stomach full of pills
A mind full of wills

She’ll never be anything less than beautiful to me

My little pharmacy princess [with her ♥ of silver]
Will always be on my mind [I’ll love her forever]

XxX…On my forehead she graces…XxX

Bloodied and broken, she repairs my snapped ribs
Salve and balm, slathered over little white fibs

So kiss me, my darling, and hold me in your arms
Make me float away into your dastardly-charms

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  • blemished irises
    April 21, 2007

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    Yeah;; She's Pretty Wonderful.

    Some of the rhymes seemed a tad forced, but the poem was a sweet gesture.

    "She’ll never be anything less than beautiful to me"
    Such a Cute fucking Line.


  • ninja girl 418
    April 16, 2007
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    omg this was awesome! i loved it!


  • x.digital.love.x
    April 16, 2007
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    babes, you know i adore this.


  • InfiniteCaitlin
    April 13, 2007
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    My little pharmacy princess [with her ♥ of silver]
    Will always be on my mind [I’ll lover her forever]

    XxX…On my forehead she graces…XxX

    Bloodied and broken, she repairs my snapped ribs
    Salve and balm, slathered over little white fibs


    sweet sweet bb doll!!

    simply amazing!!!

    you are such a great writer!!!!!


    love you dollie pie


  • oh willoughby
    April 13, 2007
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    so sweet
    so beautiful

    great job!


  • makeout kid
    April 13, 2007
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    awww.
    this is so sweet.

  • x.digital.love.x
    April 13, 2007

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    awwww!!!!!
    you make me smile!!!!
    i love you too!!!!

    My little pharmacy princess [with her ♥ of silver]
    Will always be on my mind [I’ll lover her forever]

    loooooooove this part!!! and this:

    Bloodied and broken, she repairs my snapped ribs
    Salve and balm, slathered over little white fibs

    So kiss me, my darling, and hold my in your arms
    Make me float away into your dastardly-charms

    your amazing!!! ily hunni!!!!

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