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Footprints

You left footprints in the sand,

Like holes upon my heart.

 

Questions unanswered,

From the day you had to part.

 

The footprints are gone,

The water washed them away.

 

The holes remain,

They will always stay.

 

Questions unanswered,

They have no answers.

 

From the day you went away.

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  • lyna05
    June 30, 2008

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    Nice Write

    Nice poem I love the way you wrote it and i think it is an amazing poem. It is touching and an awsome job.


  • angelsslayer
    April 13, 2007

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    A nicely written poem. i liked the short verses and then the single line at the end. An inrigeing write.