Teeming, seething [in the ebony sea]
Learning to drown [don’t try to rescue me]
Creeping, crawling [along the barnacled walls]
A Selkie in the brush [another rider falls]
This fearsome water-horse [unable to ride]
Your inexorable-fears [unable to hide]
She speaks to you along the misty-shore
Feet callused and rough from the sandy-floor
Shriek into the night [no one will hear you]
As I drag you into the surf [eyes burning-blue]
Please tell me what you think
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goodness, how could i forget?!?!
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oh wow.
this
is
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awesome!!!! i love it!!! i really doooo lol!!!! you have nice imagery and awesome mini story goin on here!
rock on!
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horribly beautiful!
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morbid.
yet beautiful.
just...
stunning.
i love your work.
[i think i love you]
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[lol]
ur so sweet.
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This fearsome water-horse [unable to ride]
Your inexorable-fears [unable to hide]
She speaks to you along the misty-shore
Feet callused and rough from the sandy-floor
Shriek into the night [no one will hear you]
As I drag you into the surf [eyes burning-blue]
LOVE IT DOLL
GAWD YOU ARE SOO AMAZING!!!
and you write the best poems hunny pie!!
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oh hunnipie!
such amazing imagery!!!
Shriek into the night [no one will hear you]
As I drag you into the surf [eyes burning-blue]
i adore you! marry me?
wait...
you already did!!!!
lol! ily hunni!!!
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