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she

hate filled her eyes
she turned to run
but began to cry
she turned back
and saw him
there he lyed
she held hi,
she wept
as he took his last breath
"I love you", she said
"and I'm sorry. sorry for what I did"
she felt blood
fill her heart
as he smiled
then died

Author notes

This I wrote on oneof my depressed days, which seem to slowly fill up my calender.

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  • PainedLoner
    April 13, 2007
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    Well written!


  • Stupified
    April 13, 2007

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    WOW! COOL

    That has to be my favorite short poem I've ever read! NICE write! I like it very much. Keep writing!!