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Erotic-apples

That star-shaped center arouses ecstasy in me
That erotically-sweet fruit plucked from a tree

Sticky juice stains are a fragrant release
Tart red flesh enrobing white meat

Dripping clear, tangent lullabies of apple pies
My favorite fruit will never speak to me of lies

Erotic, spiritual bites of that sickly-sweet food
Sliced with a knife, silvered yet crude… 


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  • BArBiE slaPPed m3
    April 15, 2007
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    Wowzah nice dolly real nice.
    xoxo,
    Your Dumpster Doll


  • DRUNKENxXxBABiiD0LL
    April 14, 2007
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    omfg!
    i ♥ 'd this!
    its about an apple and it sounds so sensual!
    love it hun!


  • KissMeGoodnight
    April 13, 2007

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    oh wow lol. ive never seen anything like this before! never known anyone to do something crazy like this! and you worked it!!!! haha, awesome job here


  • InfiniteCaitlin
    April 13, 2007
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    Doll I love how you turned an apple into Erotica!!!

    Gawd behbeh doll you are amazing!!!


  • oh willoughby
    April 13, 2007
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    lol
    very good
    and creatively interesting!


  • KittieLyyn
    April 13, 2007

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    wow! hehe inspired by my fetish?? awesome! makes me want another apple glad i could e of inspiration

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