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You hit my car!

You threw the rocks
Your name says so
You busted my windshield
And blackened my eye
I got a piece of glass in my foot
It hurts so bad
I know you didn't mean to
It wasn't intended for me
The reason you threw it
I plainly did notice
For on the other-side of the road
I saw the ferret chasing you
But still in the end
I know
Something must be done
You hit my car and me!

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Sorry I had to!!!

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  • ashley loves josh
    April 14, 2007

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    LOL

    WHAT IS THAT ABOUT! THAT IS REALLY FUNNY.........IM REALLY AFRAID OF FERRETS... NO REALLY I AM!!! GREAT JOB


    • Love-Lee
      April 14, 2007
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      OMG!

      Really the chick who was having the contest is too!!! I love them I used to have 2 of them they are expensive too!!! And they stink! LOL!!!

  • throwing the rocks
    April 13, 2007
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    -sniffle-

    Ferrets.
    AHHHH!

    Cute, hun.
    Comepletely mad at you though. <3<3


  • Megan Awesome
    April 13, 2007

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    Ummm... Lol... interesting. I thought it was funny myself. It kinda made me giggle. I like the part about the ferrit. I love those little things! Lol. Thank you for making me laugh. I needed it.
    Megan


    • Love-Lee
      April 13, 2007
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      I know

      I wanted to add that in because the girl hosting th contest randomly mentioned that she was deathly afraid of ferrets so I added it in there just for her!!!


  • Heavens Child
    April 13, 2007

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    Brilliant.....I absolutely love it. When I was young me and a friend were throwing pine cones at vehicles...one van stopped and we got in big shit. Never did it again...lol. Great job and the best of luck in the contest.

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